努力不被钉小人

好久没更新日志了。【其实是欠着更新没好意思到处瞎蹦达……】

今天RP了一下。放出来的5Q多AoT中有4Q都是下午一边走神一边磨洋工一边翻出来的。翻的时候自己就在念叨,照这个堕落速度,早晚有一天会拖稿拖到被读者钉小人……不过好在还是按时保量地更新了。其实只要没有第八个字母的戏份我的速度还是很快的哈哈……

更新完刚刚抒发一下自己的感慨,就接受了狐狸阿姨的教诲——= =稿难道不是用来拖的吗?

阿姨,这是您【拖稿】人生的经验总结么?

默。没有女王那么强的气场,还是乖乖更新,省得将来被怨念。不过其实翻译的压力要比原创作者好一点哈哈,因为实在嫌翻译慢的话还可以自己去看原文嘛【PIA】~

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关于这次更新的AoT的内容,其实还是有很多感慨的。不过下午因为赶稿,啰嗦的就不多。

It was not her whom Dumbledore had abandoned—it was him. There was no one left in the world who understood why he had fought the war, and how much it had cost him.

“You take this godfather business quite seriously,” said Granger.
突然想起某期看电影的评论——如果你此生有幸,可以得到他的承诺。

还有这里:
He thought of the endless days alone, the oblivion of mort, the brooding before the fire. Night after night, bottle after bottle emptied, the past so trodden upon that it was hardly recognizable anymore. Was it the memory of things nearly three decades ago, or was it his own listlessness, his own shock of finding himself without a master, without a buried recollection to serve? And this, even this—Granger’s baby. Why had he so readily agreed to be its godfather? It could not be anything but an inconsistency, he thought. Was it for Granger’s (and his own) sake, or was it because Jonathan Frost would have wanted it, that, if Potter were still here, he would be in this position instead, and Snape felt the phantasmal and wistful chains of obligation?
这一段的独白很长,很压抑,很沉重,也很难翻。自然,我得承认我的翻译削弱了原文中安静而伤痛的力度,但是我真的只能说我尽力了。作为一个译者,这大概是最心痛最无奈的事情了。

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啊,对了。差点忘记。

上一次更新的翻译日志,很压抑,吓到了几位好友。很抱歉。粥仔现在应该算是暂时渡过了难关。之后会不会再次崩溃,以我这样脆弱的小心脏,真的不敢保证。但是我会尽力不压在心里。很谢谢,还有很抱歉。

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秘密留言 :

稿难道不是用来拖的吗?说得太好了吧= =+

话说我一直没有完整的看过一篇HPSS……
我一直立志要看来着……

那么就从AoT开始?= =+
反正我已经下载下来了OTZ

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哈哈,前面那一句我已经决定忽视啦【话说你的坑应该快填平了吧

作为你的第一篇HPSS文的译者我万分荣幸呐
要知道,你是我看完的第一篇【还感动到从此开始萌SBSS】的文的作者哦~
你那篇After All, I Love You让我哭得稀里哗啦的……
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